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Hello everyone :wave: I havent posted anything in awhile so I wanted to do a journal of my thoughts on :iconprincesselizabeth013:'s character bio
NOTE: I'm only trying to help you and I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, so don't go all crazy on me
so let's get this started (bold is me)

Name: Elizabeth
Name is alright so no problem there
Gender: Female
Species: Hedgehog
Hedgehogs are really over used in the sonic fan base and she kind of looks like a daughter of shadow in my opinion
Age: Immortal(Physical:17)
How is she immortal? No seriously do you know how overused that is in basically every single fandom. So if I were you I would take that out completely if you can't come up with a good explanation.
Weight: Secret
Why is her weight a secret? That makes no sense. Is she doesn't look overweight so why have it as secret 
Occupation: Princess
Princess is not an occupation it's a tittle . If I remember correctly you said that she is a treasure hunter, yes? So I would replace princess with treasure hunter
Ability type: Speed
speed is REALLY overused especially when the character is a hedgehog  
Likes: Shadow(friend, although he is protecting her), Team Dark(her team), Rouge(her friend and partner), Omega, Amy, The D.L.A, Freedom Fighters, bubble baths, Sadik(her boyfriend), Rosie the Rabbit, Silver, Blaze, Cream, Jason the Echidna(friend), Quick the Hedgehog.
The only thing that is an actual like is bubble baths. I noticed that most of things she likes are people. Most of this could be called her friends.
Dislikes: Eggman, Eclipse, Mephiles, Rouge flirting with Shadow, traitors to the crown, Scourge, SWATbots, being lied to, seeing her friends wounded and/or killed.
This is a little bit better than her likes, but why does she hate it when rouge is flirting with shadow? Same issue with the names could easily put them as enemy's   
-Author's note: She is not a Mary-Sue, a gender-bend, a recolor, a slut, or all 4!
Just because you say she's not a mary sue doesn't mean she isn't and she looks like a gender bent version of shadow. She's like 6 guys right sooooooooo yeah that does kind of does make her a slut
So yeah basically this is my thoughts on her character (or a bad critique whichever). you could take out something's and add something's so I hope I helped a little


Tynifer out :wave:

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Well The "Princess" saw the critique and she hates it. Why I'm I not surprised.

First off someone known as :iconshadowfan92: gave me more information on her and her character is the biggest slut. EVER. So what she told me was that her character has slept with 19 guy......what the fuck? Oh and that's not all she has been RAPED by 2 guys, has 2-3 kids, and dates two children chipmunks. So now she's a pedophile now great. Honestly she doesn't even have a proper bio and not much is known about her.

What pissed me off so much is that she blocked me before I could reply to her comment. that is sad
here is what I was going to say "Why? I was just trying to help you. Look girl you need to learn to take a critique if you ever want to improve on your character. Sure it's sometimes can hurt you but if you don't take it your character is only going to get worse." And that's when I found out she blocked me. I know she said that she said that she's trying to not block people but she's doing horrible job if she blocked me just for making a critique. 

so that's about it so yeah

tynifer out :wave:

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Hi my name is tyne but you can call me tynifer but I really don't care.One of the things you should know about me is that I love to write and draw but don't post anything I write because well I don't know why but what ever.I like dragon ball z,soul eater,death note and black butler.I'm also working on becoming better with mmd and pmd as well
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your welcome :D
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Thank you so much for the watch!!! :)
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